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These pages smell of diesel
kissing my fingers--
   leafing to an empty space to lay some ink.
such kisses linger upon my palms
and a whiff is caught off guard
trudging past my senses.
A diesel cologne my lover wears--
   these pages wear his scent.
Each time my hand raises to
brush away a tear    i smell this
diesel dream,
       drilling through a weary mourning.
some mystery to how each page
wears diesel--an accident
frought with irony
       caution:flammable
hearts play with matches.
should my pen strike this
page--ignite?
shhh, let not this diesel lover reply
            close your eyes--for
            the flames already lick
            at your lashes to open.
lest hearts awaken.
diesel pages
whisper memories yet to be had--
   quietly, for slumber still blesses
innocent heart's diesel desire.
©2004-2009 ~only-hope
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Author's Comments

my notebook is soaked with diesel.
reminds me of a someone.
thus this ensues.

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:iconch0sen:
GOOD MOTHER OF PERKINESS, how am i supposed... hehe. nm.

this is some awesomeness like you wouldn't believe... i can't figure out why you don't poetify more often. it's been a while, and hopefully won't be again until you decide to continue the poemism... i need to read back through your past works and get back in the groove. quite rad
:iconhellaciousgrace:
this is very good!!! i like the composition, the separation, the stanzas, the repititions, how you use the connotation of diesel your advantage. (i think of trucks, fossil fuel, and dirt), i adore your diction, your metaphors, your syntax, and your expression. excellent job! keep up the very original work! :-)

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:iconsamsonite:
hehehehe..... I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! wow. heh *big stupid grin*

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