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archaic blacksmith

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Her trinket glowed
with irreverent memories.
A solemn reminder of ancient
treasures passed.
the dull matte luminescence
ricocheted
      off the pocked imperfections.
its tinny ding resonating
from its core
remembered its artisan,
cold caloused hands sculpting
simplicity's necessity.
the title sucks. forgive me. i don't title my poems but for this site... save a few.

this is about a tibetan teapot in my CW class... yeah, booo riiing thing to write about.
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xtheravenx's avatar
You describe it much as one would an heirloom.

I don't think it's that bad, though it does feel like an excerpt from something bigger.

:ninjafella:Matt :ninjafella: